Not a bad version of the song, only complaint is the kick drum. It's a bit too in-your-face for rock music, and feels like it's trying to be the focus of the whole song.
My advice would be to chuck a limiter on there, and lower the level of it, and you should be sorted.
Thanks, I will bear that in mind.
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